The First Day of School

The First Day of School

I wake up and I realise its monday (monday)

I wish I was still playing on Sunday (Sunday)

Its the first day of school

and thats really not cool

I'm really really scared

'cause I'm seriously not prepaired

I need to put my fears aside 

cause I cannot shay here and hide

where is my class room?

I really need too find it soon!

what subject do I have first?

I feel like I'm going to burst!

my teacher is like a dragon
she pulls me like a wagon

most of the girls at school
think that they are really super cool

Song By Amelia and Eleanor

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