Thomas Goes Flying!

My holiday

My brother went to the Canterbury Aro club for a flight. The first thing I saw was a massive mega monstrous plane. But then my mum told me that was not the plane that Thomas was going in then I looked down and I saw a tiny plane it was the size of a pea. The pilot took 10 minutes then he asked where Thomas wanted to go. When they took of I saw a Hercules I said where are they going bro? Then my mum said there going to Antarctica, what! That's minus billion degrees," my mum got me and my sister a drink and a chocolate bar and I said "thanks mum." then Kate spilt her drink, I told her off and she started to cry. Then Thomas landed then we went home.

The endMy holiday

My brother went to the Canterbury Aro club for a flight. The first thing I saw was a massive mega monstrous plane. But then my mum told me that was not the plane that Thomas was going in then I looked down and I saw a tiny plane it was the size of a pea. The pilot took 10 minutes then he asked where Thomas wanted to go. When they took of I saw a Hercules I said where are they going bro? Then my mum said there going to Antarctica, what! That's minus billion degrees," my mum got me and my sister a drink and a chocolate bar and I said "thanks mum." then Kate spilt her drink, I told her off and she started to cry. Then Thomas landed then we went home

The end

My holiday

My brother went to the Canterbury Aro club for a flight. The first thing I saw was a massive mega monstrous plane. But then my mum told me that was not the plane that Thomas was going in then I looked down and I saw a tiny plane it was the size of a pea. The pilot took 10 minutes then he asked where Thomas wanted to go. When they took of I saw a Hercules I said where are they going bro? Then my mum said there going to Antarctica, what! That's minus billion degrees," my mum got me and my sister a drink and a chocolate bar and I said "thanks mum." then Kate spilt her drink, I told her off and she started to cry. Then Thomas landed then we went home

The endMy holiday

My brother went to the Canterbury Aro club for a flight. The first thing I saw was a massive mega monstrous plane. But then my mum told me that was not the plane that Thomas was going in then I looked down and I saw a tiny plane it was the size of a pea. The pilot took 10 minutes then he asked where Thomas wanted to go. When they took of I saw a Hercules I said where are they going bro? Then my mum said there going to Antarctica, what! That's minus billion degrees," my mum got me and my sister a drink and a chocolate bar and I said "thanks mum." then Kate spilt her drink, I told her off and she started to cry. Then Thomas landed then we went home

The end

The Car Trip

The Car Trip Getting in to my Dads massive monster truck I tell my little sister to ’’zip it!’ ’because James's eyes where all ready glued shut lying there in his little  swag pants peacefully sleeping but of course Cate couldn't keep her mouth shut for five seconds and started blurting out stuff, LOL not... James eye lids were trembling one last shsh made her mouth zip well least I thought so.... We set off to Timaru in Dad's cram packed car and due to Cate talking James deliberately woke up and that's where the chronicle of three year old talk comes in, but no time for that let's start this story for real, the car was a bit munted with all the stuff in there it was hot and I mean really hot, it was like some giant came and picked up the car and through us to the sun. I could feel myself fading away until we reached Ashburton we were saved! MC DONALDS time, Me Dad and James went in but he bursted in to tears in but somehow we survived and brought the energy back to the car and ate up 1 HOUR LATER .We are nearly home the song The Base is on, like a bunch of drunk monkeys we sang it together. We where home I felt like zapping myself to Hawii you may think jess she can't cope with a two hour drive well let me tell you this I think you would be tired if your siblings were yelling at you the whole car ride Bre I'm hungry Bre I'm thirsty Bre Bre Bre Bre Bre ok I guess you understand, now if you would excuse me I've got some sleep to catch up on!                                   P.S < I’M NOT CRAZY>

By Breana

Australia Pop

Australia

I finally arrived in Aussie. I walked out side and it was burning hot.  I felt like a biscuit in an oven.

We hoped in the car, we drove to our destination.

It was 12:00am at night! We were staying at the Hilton, it was amazing. The lifts were magnificent they were made out of glass. The floor was like a mirror, there was not a spec of dust. It was magical! Like a palace. There was a buffet, with was every single food you could ever imagine!

We had to take two lifts to get to our room.

I loved it  J

:)poppy

The Maze

The Maze

I was in the middle of a labyrinth. I was following my teammates around like a zombie, I tried to help but they ignored me as always. After there 100^th fail I tried to take on the labyrinth by my self. In an hour I was in the middle of nowhere, not a foot print in site, my feet twisted and turned until I was on a deserted island and all that was on it was me. And then I let my feet carry me around the maze so I could think and suddenly I escaped! I was the first one out of course and I enjoyed a delicious ice cream. And as everyone came out so surprised that I had come out first so as we went home to have a BBQ my dad asked “how did you get out so fast?” and all I said was “I let my feet carry me”. i had a lot of fun at the BBQ all my cousins came over and we played cops and robbers it was really fun. And then we watched a movie it was called legally blonde it was really funny and then we went to bed. But I stayed up all night wondering how I got out of the labyrinth and how did I get out first when everyone started before I went off on my own. But no one will ever no. and thinking of that for a while I fell asleep. By EmmaJ        

The Smallest Plane I've Been in!

I wasn’t quite sure how we were going to get five people and four bikes on to the tiny plane.  The pilot started fitting some strange contraptions to the underside of the wings.  The small plane was transformed and it started to look more like a modern day robot pterydactyl!

Now inside, strapped in, headphones and microphones fitted.  We were pilots of a World War II miniature bomber.  Ready for take off.  Roger that.  You're good to go.  The plane lurched into action and accelerated quickly towards the end of the runway.  The end of the runway.  The end of the runway!  The skyeeeee!  Zooom!

With surprisingly little effort we slipped through the sky like a speeding bullet.  The ground far below us now, and us, and our plane, and the bikes hanging under the wings held in the sky by invisible strings.  Just a disappearing dot in someone else eye looking up.

Half way to our destination we were hit by invisible gun fire.  The plane bounced like a ball in water.  Always staying afloat but sometimes moving unpredictably so as to make your stomach wish that it was back on the ground.  With so much to see from our birds eye view the time past quickly and before we knew it we were dropping back towards the ground.  But where?  I couldn’t see a runway.  Oh you mean that bumpy field… Hang on.  Here we go...

My field of view was filled with green and then only sky.  I felt the sudden kick and grasp of the ground pulling at the wheels.  The engine roars one last time and 

we 

are 

safe.

By Mr. H

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